Friday, May 15, 2009

Celestial Dreams

I'm deep inside the night with a smile on my face
My soul goes on a flight, getting out of my place
Floating with the clouds, shining with the stars
Leaving the crowd behind, breaking out the bars

My journey continues as the dawn breaks
The city underneath slowly awakes
But I'm already awake, having a daydream
I dream of a soul that doesn't fit the scheme

Time is passing by, but not my joy
Because my dreamworld is all mine to enjoy
Whatever I need is whenever there for me
Whomever I want is wherever here with me

In my dreamworld, the whole world is mine
Especially the one that makes it all divine
The one who gives me power to cross the line
More than any word could ever define

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The first poem I wrote together with my dear friend Allie, who is my Flame of Inspiration, feeding the miserable sparkle I have for poetic ideas these days. Very special thanks to her, for making me write again, and also for making my days recently, every day again and again... I most probably will never be able to redeem all the happiness she's been giving me lately. (:
Thanks again, and I hope we make a habit of this. =)

9 comments:

Alev said...

Awww, you are awfully sweet. Thanks to you, too. ^^

And you can be sure that we'll make a habit of this. :D

Lone Poet said...

Come on, make me blush, you seem to have mastered the method... :P

I certainly hope we do. :D

Alev said...

It's a natural gift that I have, can't control it.. Think of it as getting inspiration to write poetry. :P

We will. ;)

Lone Poet said...

:D Well, you're so right. :P I'll try to think of it that way...

I know. (:

Amin hosseini nasab said...

:)) wow glad you two are getting so well together :D

i've commented on thee beauty of the poem on alev's blog :P go there

Lone Poet said...

How well? :D

Okay, I drop by. ;) Anyway, everyone only quoted her lines, so hers is the honour. :D

Amin hosseini nasab said...

so well :P

her lines?

Amin hosseini nasab said...

hahahaha i meant getting "on" so well

Lone Poet said...

Okay. :P

Yeah, her lines. None of mine. :D